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New BitchSlapSmitty artwork up! Evaluate if desired.

please cease and desist this plagiarism of Doc Octopus from Spiderman. You will be recieving a subpoena shortly.
 
Sure. First, Like You Mention, The Use Of Computer Lettering Is Terrible. Some Artists Can Utilize It Although It Is A Different Font Than Comic Sans. Try Your Own Handwriting. It May Not Be As Neat As A Computer Font But It Will Match Your Art. Your Panel Layouts Are Atrocious. Panel One Is Adequate, It Establishes The Mood Of The Strip. The Next “Panel” Translates Action Well, Although The “Flame” Borders Seem Ridiculous. Do Either Of Those Characters Produce Fire? Are They Named “Flame-man”? Why Fire? After That It All Falls Apart. It Is As If You Spent Too Much On The Previous Panels And Realized You Were Running Out Of Room. Therefore You Crammed As Much Information As You Could Into The Remaining Space. And It Shows. The “Kick His Ass” Panel Is Awkward Because Of The Placement Of The Ring’s Ropes. Also, The Shadows Are Off. The Last Two Panels Need Work As Well In Terms Of Lighting And Character Placement. It Is Okay To Remove The Background But Why Are They Cut-off At The Knees? Forgive My Crude Skills, But I Have Re-Arranged Your Strip TO Better Illustrate What I Mean. Here:
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M.O.D.O.K. said:
Sure. First, Like You Mention, The Use Of Computer Lettering Is Terrible. Some Artists Can Utilize It Although It Is A Different Font Than Comic Sans. Try Your Own Handwriting. It May Not Be As Neat As A Computer Font But It Will Match Your Art. Your Panel Layouts Are Atrocious. Panel One Is Adequate, It Establishes The Mood Of The Strip. The Next “Panel” Translates Action Well, Although The “Flame” Borders Seem Ridiculous. Do Either Of Those Characters Produce Fire? Are They Named “Flame-man”? Why Fire? After That It All Falls Apart. It Is As If You Spent Too Much On The Previous Panels And Realized You Were Running Out Of Room. Therefore You Crammed As Much Information As You Could Into The Remaining Space. And It Shows. The “Kick His Ass” Panel Is Awkward Because Of The Placement Of The Ring’s Ropes. Also, The Shadows Are Off. The Last Two Panels Need Work As Well In Terms Of Lighting And Character Placement. It Is Okay To Remove The Background But Why Are They Cut-off At The Knees? Forgive My Crude Skills, But I Have Re-Arranged Your Strip TO Better Illustrate What I Mean. Here:
jmhunter2.jpg
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You made it look worse. If you can't figure out why some of the things look the way they do, then you apparently haven't read the strips that come before.

The ropes look fine to me. The font actually is comic sans, but w/ bold.

Nothing was rushed on this strip. I finished early in fact. It took less than 3 days to bang this out and that's w/ me not knowing my way around photoshop at all.

It's a quickie and for a quickie, i think it does fine and gives the over all wrestling jam one half action, and one half story/sup plot for the next few people to run with.

I take pride in making 8 panels on a small strip work, to you they don't.

For me they do.

I'd say lets see some of your own work, but I don't think that's gonna happen is it?
 
BitchSlapSmitty said:
You made it look worse. If you can't figure out why some of the things look the way they do, then you apparently haven't read the strips that come before.

The ropes look fine to me. The font actually is comic sans, but w/ bold.

Nothing was rushed on this strip. I finished early in fact. It took less than 3 days to bang this out and that's w/ me not knowing my way around photoshop at all.

It's a quickie and for a quickie, i think it does fine and gives the over all wrestling jam one half action, and one half story/sup plot for the next few people to run with.

I take pride in making 8 panels on a small strip work, to you they don't.

For me they do.

I'd say lets see some of your own work, but I don't think that's gonna happen is it?
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Again You Are Defensive When You First Asked For Evaluation. Stop Crying. Yes, I Know It Is A Font Called Comic-Sans. I Am Not A Retarded Mongoloid Like You. I Said To Not Use It. Try Reading. The Ropes Do Look Fine In Other Panels, I Was Specifically Pointing Out That One Panel Where The Rope Comes Across Horizontally Over The Text. It Looks As If It Is A Panel Border And Not A Rope. If It Was Angled It Would Not Have That Effect As Much. Not Sure How I Made It Worse. I Simplified The Number Of Panels But Kept Your Story. Read Will Eisner's Book. Also, If You Do Not Want Criticism Then Do Not Ask For It. Screaming And Yelling And Pouting Is Childish.
 
You May Notice I Said Nothing Of Your Artwork. I Evaluated Your Story-Telling And Composition. Those Are As Important To Comics As The Art. Perhaps More. Take And Old Jack Kirby Comic, Photocopy It, And White-Out All The Text. By The Panel Compostion Alone You Can Read The Story-No Need For Words.
 
M.O.D.O.K. said:
Again You Are Defensive When You First Asked For Evaluation. Stop Crying. Yes, I Know It Is A Font Called Comic-Sans. I Am Not A Retarded Mongoloid Like You. I Said To Not Use It. Try Reading. The Ropes Do Look Fine In Other Panels, I Was Specifically Pointing Out That One Panel Where The Rope Comes Across Horizontally Over The Text. It Looks As If It Is A Panel Border And Not A Rope. If It Was Angled It Would Not Have That Effect As Much. Not Sure How I Made It Worse. I Simplified The Number Of Panels But Kept Your Story. Read Will Eisner's Book. Also, If You Do Not Want Criticism Then Do Not Ask For It. Screaming And Yelling And Pouting Is Childish.
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I already have Will Eisner's book and just because YOU think it should be a certain way, doesn't make it so.

And for the record.
Acting like a dick on a message board is childish.

You back handed insulting sad excuse for a fucking sock.
 
M.O.D.O.K. said:
You May Notice I Said Nothing Of Your Artwork. I Evaluated Your Story-Telling And Composition. Those Are As Important To Comics As The Art. Perhaps More. Take And Old Jack Kirby Comic, Photocopy It, And White-Out All The Text. By The Panel Compostion Alone You Can Read The Story-No Need For Words.
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For the record, if you take out the text to any old jack kirby comic, most times the story telling suffers due to the dramatic effect Jack was going for.

They're not always clear to read and know what's going on. Is he still the bomb?

Hell fucking yes, are you full of shit when it comes to critiquing?

Hell fucking yes.

The story telling and composition is what I pride myself on, it's what I utilize in the place for my lack of accurate drawing ability. I do hard poses, tricky angles even if I suck at it, to get better.

Learn how to properly critique you fucking Reganite.
 
"My Name Is Bitch Slap Smitty. I Want To Be An Artist But I Will Not Take Any Critcism Of My Work. Anyone Who Says Anything Negative Is Wrong And An Asshole. Anyone Who Offers Any Constructive Criticism Is Wrong And An Asshole. Nyahh Nyahh Nyahh I Can Not Hear You And Only Listen To What I Want To Nyahh Nyahh Nyahh."
I Am Done Wasting My Time With You.
 
M.O.D.O.K. said:
"My Name Is Bitch Slap Smitty. I Want To Be An Artist But I Will Not Take Any Critcism Of My Work. Anyone Who Says Anything Negative Is Wrong And An Asshole. Anyone Who Offers Any Constructive Criticism Is Wrong And An Asshole. Nyahh Nyahh Nyahh I Can Not Hear You And Only Listen To What I Want To Nyahh Nyahh Nyahh."
I Am Done Wasting My Time With You.
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You're not criticizing, you're pulling a troll and you're generally un-informed when it comes to crafting sequentials.

Give me a real crit and I wont complain, I'll ask questions on how to make it better.

If I don't agree w/ you I wont use it or see a need for it.

I get plenty of crits at other places from other people which does help me in the work.

You? You're an ass hat.

I bet you couldn't even break down the pros and cons of geedis, kletz, and my work in one thorough, thought out critique covering all the basis of sequential and artistic story telling.

You claim to know something of the craft, but you don't know crap.

Ponder that w/ your B.I.G. M.E.L.O.N
 
BitchSlapSmitty said:
You're not criticizing, you're pulling a troll and you're generally un-informed when it comes to crafting sequentials.

Give me a real crit and I wont complain, I'll ask questions on how to make it better.

If I don't agree w/ you I wont use it or see a need for it.

I get plenty of crits at other places from other people which does help me in the work.

You? You're an ass hat.

I bet you couldn't even break down the pros and cons of geedis, kletz, and my work in one thorough, thought out critique covering all the basis of sequential and artistic story telling.

You claim to know something of the craft, but you don't know crap.

Ponder that w/ your B.I.G. M.E.L.O.N
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I Gave My Opinion, You Cried. I Stated Facts, You Cried More. I Offered Advice, You Cried And, As Usual, Accused Me Of Knowing Nothing Of This Craft. Therefore = Pwn. On Many Levels.
 
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