I’ve been reading Nemesis Games for about a year now and I’m only starting to enjoy it in the last 50 pages or so. Part of it might be that the main characters all got split up in the last book and have remained apart in this one, which has meant that new, less interesting ones have tagged along with them so they have someone to think out loud to. We don’t get much of the interaction we enjoy and it’s worsened by the characters constantly pining for each other. Instead of investing in the newbies, we’re reminded on a regular basis how much better the core group is. Uh... you should probably stop doing that, writers. You’re lampshading how dull the books are. Also, a lot of the interest in the first book was the mystery of the protomolecule, which is only now mentioned in passing. Instead it’s lots of political in-fighting, which just sort of happens to the characters rather than them taking an active interest in it, because they’re largely apolitical mercenaries who don’t have a stake in one side beating another. They want everyone to just get along, which is all very nice, but not interesting. And the last thing I have a problem with is how repetitive the writing is, both in terms of plot points (every battle feels the same and goes on for ever) and language (they’ll hit on a really poetic way of describing something, then use it again five pages later). Maybe the two authors edit each others chapters or something. If so, they ought to let someone else do it.