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Nascent Drama

"It's no longer needed, comrade," said Dual stiffly. "Beasts of England was the song of the Rebellion. But the Rebellion is now completed. The execution of the traitors this afternoon was the final act.
 
The enemy both external and internal has been defeated. In Beasts of England we expressed our longing for a better society in days to come. But that society has now been established. Clearly this song has no longer any purpose."
 
Frightened though they were, some of the animals might possibly have protested, but at this moment the sheep set up their usual bleating of "Four legs good, two legs bad," which went on for several minutes and put an end to the discussion.
 
and this was sung every Sunday morning after the hoisting of the flag. But somehow neither the words nor the tune ever seemed to the animals to come up to Beasts of England.
 
You didnt finish it yet! I was reading your name changed version last night. There was one instance where you accidently left Napolean's name in. It's where Dual, Shocka, and were you introduced. I noticed I had a bit part as well.
 
Oops, I tried to get them all!

Yeah, I had to squeeze a few names into bit parts (like "somebody", or "a sheep") to fit everyone I wanted...

I'll finish the last three chapeters, and post post the "cast list" (in another thread) later ;)
 
A FEW days later, when the terror caused by the executions had died down, some of the animals remembered-or thought they remembered-that the Sixth Commandment decreed "No animal shall kill any other animal." And though no one cared to mention it in the hearing of the pigs or the dogs, it was felt that the killings which had taken place did not square with this.
 
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